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lipu "toki:toki Elepen" la tenpo tu la ante li ni
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:toki Elepen li toki sin <s>pi</s> ante li pona tawa <s>sitelen toki ma</s> toki pi ma ale / toki pi ma mute. ona li jo e pona mute: | |||
:1. ona li jo e '''kalama lili taso lon nimi. kalama''' ona li sama <s>li</s> toki Italija li '''sama''' toki ''Epanja''. | |||
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:seme? ni li toki ala e ijo sama a! | |||
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:Hi, I'm sorry to say that this would go beyond a simple revision. Starting with point 2, it seems to be talking about something completely different. So what you would need is not someone revising your text, but completely retranslating it. Hm, in case you've been using ChatGPT to do this, I should inform you that even with the improvements in version 4, which isn't available to the broad public yet, it's still at a beginner level when it comes to toki pona. | |||
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:One way or another, this wiki, which is for articles that are exclusively in toki pona, wouldn't be the right venue. | |||
:[[jan:Jan Ke Tami|jan Ke Tami]] ([[toki jan:Jan Ke Tami|toki]]) 2023-05-09T20:54:41 (UTC) | |||